Showing posts with label Irina Pokharel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Irina Pokharel. Show all posts

Thursday, December 3, 2015

Reflective Essay



At the beginning of the semester I was a bit nervous about taking English 121. I had already realized learning a second language would be difficult. Every time I looked at the syllabus, I worried how I would get through all the assigned topics. However, my goal for this class was to develop my writing skills through the blog assignments, exemplification essay, and research essay, so I got to work.
During the semester I learned how to create blogs, how to search database resources, how to do MLA formatting, and how to write research papers. From this class I have come to understand that brainstorming and layout are the most helpful ways to begin any type of paper.
During this semester, my first achievement was creating blogs. Writing blogs was a new experience for me. At first, it was hard for me to understand the assignment, but when I followed the guidelines given by my instructor, it became easy. Working on a blog in a group helped develop my conversation and discussion skills.
Writing the exemplification essay provided another new experience. At first I felt comfortable with the assignment, but it turned out to be difficult. I did not have a enough details to write about my topic. I tried hard, though, and gave more time to revision. During this assignment I realized that reading various sources is very helpful to develop one’s writing ability.
The most interesting task during semester was the research essay. The various parts of the research process, the prospectus, the annotated bibliography were interesting and came easily for me. I did a lot of database collection for the paper and spent a great deal of time searching relevant sources. During this assignment, I followed the instructor’s guidelines and read a lot of papers. After completing the assignment, I realized that reading a lot of resources is most helpful for writing research papers.
Additionally, in English 121 class I got the chance to discuss the papers and assignments in a circle of friends. I came to understand that reading a friend’s paper and giving them feedback is a great way to develop our writing skills. If I can find the mistakes for others I can correct those mistakes in my own papers.
The variety of assignments helped develop my writing skills. I feel my ability to organize my writing with proper grammar and phrasing has been increased. To develop my writing skills further I need to focus on reading more in order to make fewer mistakes.
In my view, the best part of my research paper is the way I organized the ideas. I think the way I supported the main topic with a variety of evidence was also a strength.
At the beginning of the semester my computer skills were not very strong, but now I have the confidence to search relevant scholarly sources for my papers.
During the research process, the thing I enjoyed most was the actual research, reading papers gave me the chance to learn new facts.
In addition, the thing I most disliked about research process was sorting through a massive number of sources to find relevant scholarly papers.
The most helpful tips I can offer other English 122 students writing research papers is to read sources critically and to use statistics to support their thesis.
 
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By: Irina Pokharel



Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Blog post

At first, I need to work more on research sources to relate with my opinions. My paper is not appropriately arranged..
 I am not sure that thesis statement and supporting paragraphs are related or not.
I do not think my paper has enough clarity.
However, I have given credit to each source.
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By: Irina Pokharel

Thursday, November 12, 2015

On my draft I make some changes on body paragraph by adding some more information, and I organized some of the citations.
I added more opinion on body paragraph, but I need to work more on it.
Oksoon change her last suppotive point, and she adds more details.
She adds more details to support counterargument.
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By: Irina Pokharel

Monday, November 9, 2015

Integrating Sources and Avoiding Plagiarism

In this chapter, I was stucked about quoting the writer's statements. Whenever I have to write ideas from other sources, I got hard time to know the idea of quoting. In this chapter, I learned various ideas about importance to give credentials to the authors.
The main theme of the chapeter is to give knowledge about plagiarism. This chapter has lot of ideas with various examples about summarizing, quoting, and paraphrasing to avoid plagiarism.
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By : Irina Pokharel

Thursday, November 5, 2015


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Definition:
     Ethos is based upon the credibility of the author. Ethos can develop the impression upon the readers.
     Pathos is based upon the one's emotions, views, and experiences.
     Logos is based upon the reasons. I think logos is the most strong point of view to support the argument. Logos is based upon the statistics, research, and facts.
S.B.S
Pathos:
     I have been traveled two of the national park in Nepal. I think I can persuade my readers with my visual experiences. During the trip I got the chance to analyze lot of biological resources like shrubs and herbs. I examined that more than 90 % of people depend upon the biological resources for food, and timber. I felt that saving each biological resources has great advantages for long term for the people and nation. Moreover, on the way, I saw the two spots where road was blocked due to landslides. In that area, I analyzed that landslide was due to the poor management system of agriculture, and degradation of forest areas.
Ethos:
      I was not so much familiar with  all the plant species, and nature of soils. however, during the field visit, i became familiarize with various vegetation, and the importance of vegetation to conserve soil quality with the help of my professor Man Kumar Dhamala. Professor also make me understand about qua-drat samplings, and analyzing the shrub vegetation. I also got chance to understand the relationship between forest resources and soil fertility on the slope areas.
logos:
    I believe that I cannot attract the reader's interest on my essays without any relevant facts, and data.
   
     

Monday, November 2, 2015

Chapter 16


It is helpful chapter to understand about Internet resources. Whenever I search some articles or journals for my paper, I always got stucked for long time. This chapter has lot of information which gives the idea to search relevant source for paper.
This chapter has lot of details which can be helpful to analyze about database resources. Finding the information in a website is easy, but finding credential facts is difficult. This chapter has good tips to understand about evaluating sources. The most interesting subject on this chapter is about comparison between Internet and library databases, which can be very helpful to analyze the source while writing paper.



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By Irina Pokharel

Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Internet source evaluation


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Google is an easily accessible webpage which allows people to search for a lot of information on various topics. I looked up effects of global warming and I got various details.  When I was searching the topic on effect of global warming, some other information also popped out on the last page and side of the webpage.  It took my attention, but that was a positive effect for me, because in that way I got the chance to find out more details about global warming.  The website I looked has general details about my topic, and I think it is a credible website. The article is written by Alina Bradford and published on 17 December, 2014(11.15 pm ET). The author has cited properly and has given credit to other sources. The links I looked at have relevant information with depth which readers can understand clearly.  Writers have provided historical research data as well as recent data.  The article has provided details with facts and statistics.  The article’s purpose is to inform and persuade.
I have understood that global warming is caused by human activities.  The author has put a lot of details about how global warming is effecting our natural environment, species, and human health.
I searched for data based information on global warming, but it was hard to get fully textual information.  Finally, I got the article which was published in the Washington Post. I got chance to read some of the really interesting facts about the effects of global warming.  This article didn't provide many details, but it's has some good details about global climate trends. In this article, Mr. Lamborghini claimed that, “more intense precipitation will reduce water scarcity without noting the increase risk of loss of lives and property from the flooding."
Works Cited

“The Real Effects of Global Warming”. The Washington Post. The Washington Post, 19 sept. 2013. Web. 11 Oct. 2015.

“Effects of Global Warming.” Live Science.com. N.p., n.d. Web. 12 Oct. 2015.

By Irina Pokharel

Thursday, October 8, 2015

Blog review 2

It was really interesting to look each blog from mine and other classes. When I was going through all the blogs I was cohered by every blog I reviewed. Most of the blogs seem to be more creative and clearly visualize, but among all "GiveUhDogABlog" surprised me alot. I noticed that my blog is so simple and need to make more fascinating and interesting. I understand and learned so many matters from this blog, which can help me to make my blog more creative.
     This blog(GiveUhDogABlog) has very organized layout. The blog can be viewed in chronological order. In our blog we have to scroll all the way down to view the content. However, in this blog we can take the glance at each topic by different formats like classic, flipcard, magazine, mosaic, sidebar, snapshot, and timeslide. Overall, this blog clearly reflect the every contents.
    In terms of writing also they are really good. Writings are well organized with excellent vocabularies and word mechanics. As for our blog I think we need to build up our word mechanics and try to use more complex vocabularies to develop our high academic levels. This blog has also got very attractive and funny pictures to attract the readers. Pictures have also visualize the contents of the writings. Moreover, there are some contents in this blog which is not labeled.
      At last, it is really attractive blog with best visualizations and writings. This blog makes me a lot to understand, which can help me to bring more clarity on my blog.
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By: Irina Pokharel

Monday, October 5, 2015

Argumentation

     It is really interesting chapter with lot of details, which can help to write strong argumentation paper. The most surprising point for me on this chapter was difference in argumentation and persuasion. The new subject matter I learned from this chapter is about deductive and inductive argument.
     This chapter gives main layouts to make strong argumentative essay, which includes various steps like;
- selection of topic,
-necessary to make debatable thesis statement,
-support the thesis statement by collecting different evidences,
-evidences should be relevant and sufficient to support the main idea,
-most importantly, credential for the evidence is essential while writing argumentation paper,
-lastly, opposing view point is important to make the paper strong.

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By: Irina Pokharel

Thursday, September 17, 2015

outline

English as a second language can be very frustrating and difficult.
1.Practice makes people perfect.
2. Reading the book which make you feel good and which you enjoy.
3. Try to make habit to use English in your daily conversation beside you own language.
4. Give priority to learn the basic structure of word, and arrangement of sentence.


Logical Fellacy
1. Red Herring: The fallacy in which writer directs the reader from the main issue to another issue. 
2. How to avoid red herring?
- Keep in your mind about the thesis statement and the main topic sentence.
- Try to be logical as you move from one idea to another.
- Keep appropriate track on your ideas.

Thesis Statement

People should spend time in wilderness, and that will benefits them in different ways like intellectually, spiritually, and benefits to the whole world., 

Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Exemplification

1. To show the main idea.
2. His experience many events where people were afraid of him.
3.  Staples walks the streets at night because he has insomnia.
4.  The power to frighten and intimidate.
5. Move with care, give enough room to people, and be calm in any difficult situations.
Purpose and Audience
1. "It was in the echo of that terrified women's footfalls that i first began to know the unwieldy inheritance I'd come into- the ability to alter public space in ugly ways." He implied it.
2. Combination of both. Its is appropriate because he mentioned both sides.
3. Racial profiling and discrimination. He challenged himself by being more careful.
4. He is trying to emphasize his main point and bring reader's attention. yes, he succeeded because his first sentence is intersecting and feel like to read more.
Style and Structure
1. To show more clearly with facts that people are afraid of black people. yes, he could but that sentence make his statement stronger.
2.It is an effective  way how  he start his explanation. 
3. Yes, a lot of examples. Yes, they are representative. 
4. chronological order.
5. assassin, bandit, criminal, gang member, gangster, goon, killer,rowdy, troublemaker.
Journal Entry
No.
 
Writing Workshop
3. Not too accurate. maybe he means that gangs get together to intimidate.
 Combining the Patterns
yes, several examples would have better explained how a youth becomes a thug, because there are various ways.

Monday, September 14, 2015

Exemplification
Personal Reaction:
    I learned a new subject matter in this chapter. before reading this chapter I did not have idea that i can write essay in exemplification format too. I knew that I can use examples in the body paragraph to support the main idea, but essay based on examples to persuade readers is new point that surprised me.
Professional Reaction:
    The ideas given in this chapter is very helpful to write exemplification essay. After completing this chapter I understand that how I should write essay with examples and complete my next assignment.
    At last, I came to learn the structure of exemplification essay. Most importantly, I learned that we can explain and bring clarity with use of examples. Additionally, we can be able to add interest, and persuade reader with the examples.
Improve Your Child’s Reading By These Children’S Books
By: Irina Pokharel

Thursday, September 3, 2015

Blog Review

     We all have different favorite blogs. Oksoon's favorite blog is Underground New York Public Library. Irina's favorite blog is Mark Reads, and Maritza's favorite blog is Mental_Floss. We all reviewed them and came to a conclusion that Mental_Floss is the best one.
      In Mental_Floss blog, there is a lot of information in the different forms like interesting facts, big questions, hypersonic, videos, lists, and quizzes.In contrast, Underground New York Public Library has the good information about books, but it has not sufficient information. In Mark Reads blog it is a little hard to understand for us. Unlike on Mental_Floss everything is well  organized and easy to understand.
     In our point of view,  the Mental_Floss blog is  the most informative to follow. However, it is the people's choice which blog they want to follow.
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By: Irina Pokharel, Oksoon Park, Maritza Roman

Blog Role

Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Outline

Introduction:
Thesis statement: "See, the e-blurt, like so many modes of personal expression, is all about power." 
Body
Supporting point 1:
"Im busier than you, hence I am more powerful than you."
Supporting point 2:
 Nowadays there is no proper signs of grammar while writting emails, like it used to be before a long time ago.
Supporting point3:
"If the reader cannot understand what you are saying in an email then that shows the work have done is incomplete"
Conclusion:
"Which only confirms what I've always felt about power; that the people who really understand it don't say anything at all."
By: Maritza Roman Irina Pokharel Oksoon Park

Monday, August 31, 2015

Arrangement


Chapter-3
Personal reaction:
At first, I felt that the ideas given by the writer in this chapter were easy to understand. I learned the steps of writing essays in my previous classes, but this chapter made it more clear. It mentioned that finding the main hints, main ideas, and key factors are very essential while we are writing essays. This chapter gave me the idea of recognizing the patterns of writing. It also helps me to understand the importance of  formal outlines in making the essay stronger. Another thing is that sometimes I make a lot of mistakes in the introduction part, but this chapter has provided the relevant facts of what we should not do while writing an introduction. So, now I can improve my skills to write papers.  This chapter has provided brief information to develop writing skills. In overall, I learned lot of things in this chapter. I am so happy because this class has shown me more ways to learn and understand. I  will put my great effort to achieve my goal.
Professional reaction:
It is interesting chapter for an English learner with a lot of information, details, and examples. Here, the writer has stated all the steps of writing essays in chronological order. Firstly, the writer has explained about introduction, in which he has discussed different ways of introduction patterns which will create the interest of readers. Secondly, the author has clearly mentioned that body paragraphs should be well organized and emphasize the thesis statement. I learned that the body paragraphs have to be detailed with examples, facts, quotes, and reasons. In that way, readers will easily understand the matter which the writer wants to express. Thirdly, author mentioned that in essays the conclusion is most essential part. Conclusions restate the thesis statement. Conclusions can also be the warning and suggestion to the readers. At last, the chapter concluded that formal outlines are a very important and easy way to create strong paper.
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By: Irina Pokharel

Thursday, August 27, 2015

Let Steroids into the Hall of Fame

1. The writer's general subject is drugs used in baseball games.
2. The main point is that many players use drugs in sports.
3. How drugs made them feel and help them perform better in a game , contracted infections due to use of same needles, players used the drugs and they tried to get out from getting punishment by investing money, hiring lawyers, and save their identity to be blamed, and using drugs by former athletes will be the bad example for younger athletes.
4. No.
5. Baseball fans.
6. The writer expects the audience to know about baseball.
7. No.
8. No.
9. No
10. No.
11. No.
12. Yes.
13. Yes.
By: Irina Pokharel, Maritza Roman, Oksoon Park

Interview


It was a pleasure to get to know a person from different place:  Oksoon Park from South Korea who has now moved to the United States. It is obvious that people face difficulties with understanding and speaking a second language perfectly and this is the same case for Mrs. Park. She said that she is having a hard time speaking and writing English fluently with perfection. She knew that she would have to struggle in every step of the learning systems. From her point of view, she often used narrative forms of writing, and she makes lists and prepares outlines for writing. Additionally, Oksoon mentioned that the ESL and CCR-092-100 classes helped her a lot, as she got the chance to discuss and understand things closely and interactively through being with friends and the instructor. Furthermore, she said that she has facilities related with computers and Internet and has a little bit of experience and knowledge about programs like MS Word and Excel. As in the case of social networking she uses the Korean media kakao talk and whatsapp. Although she has a great and positive experience with her instructors and classes at Front Range Community College, she mentioned that she is still not familiar with other resources of campus like the campus library and the online library. In contrast, she said that she has interacted with the student success centre and has gotten a lot of help from there.

At last, she has great expectations for this class. She said she has developed her writing and reading skills more after attending previous classes in this college and she hopes to achieve more in this class. She stated that CCR 092 helped her a lot to improve her English skills and English 121 is another essential tool to make her writing and reading skills more critical and logical. She said that she wants to develop her writing skills in a critical way. As Oksoon is new in the United States and the education system is different from her country, she often has trouble with writing and engaging in workshops. If people have the effort to learn vigorously then they will be successful in their life. Oksoon has made the effort to learn and she will put more enthusiasm into learning more new things in her life.
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By: Irina Pokharel