Exemplification

1. To show the main idea.

2. His experience many events where people were afraid of him.

3.  Staples walks the streets at night because he has insomnia.

4.  The power to frighten and intimidate.

5. Move with care, give enough room to people, and be calm in any difficult situations.

Purpose and Audience

1. "It was in the echo of that terrified women's footfalls that i first began to know the unwieldy inheritance I'd come into- the ability to alter public space in ugly ways." He implied it.

2. Combination of both. Its is appropriate because he mentioned both sides.

3. Racial profiling and discrimination. He challenged himself by being more careful.

4. He is trying to emphasize his main point and bring reader's attention. yes, he succeeded because his first sentence is intersecting and feel like to read more.

Style and Structure

1. To show more clearly with facts that people are afraid of black people. yes, he could but that sentence make his statement stronger.

2.It is an effective  way how  he start his explanation. 

3. Yes, a lot of examples. Yes, they are representative. 

4. chronological order.

5. assassin, bandit, criminal, gang member, gangster, goon, killer,rowdy, troublemaker.

Journal Entry

No.

 

Writing Workshop

3. Not too accurate. maybe he means that gangs get together to intimidate.

 Combining the Patterns

yes, several examples would have better explained how a youth becomes a thug, because there are various ways.