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Blog Post-Rough Draft Improvement.

• 3 ways I Improved my Draft.

         1. I improved my counter argument with examples.
         2. I used more data to improve my opinion.
         3. I fixed citation to fit MLA format.

• 3 Ways Maritza Improved her Draft.

         1. Maritza improved F.P in the conclusion.
         2. She used more statistics for details.
         3. She is working on worked cited