Blog Post: Rubric Criteria

1. Coherence: I tried to write my research paper with order. I am sure that it is easy to follow.

2. Use of counterargument: I need to construct my counterargument is well expressed.

3. Organization: I need to reorganize  my conclusion which is finished a little bit abrupt.

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Rubric Criteria

I need to look back at my argument because I don't think it's clear and I don't think they support what I think is my argument.
I also need to add more to it because it is only four pages.
Another thing my paper is missing is doing in-text citation.

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At first, I need to work more on research sources to relate with my opinions. My paper is not appropriately arranged..
 I am not sure that thesis statement and supporting paragraphs are related or not.
I do not think my paper has enough clarity.
However, I have given credit to each source.

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By: Irina Pokharel

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Blog Post-Rough Draft Improvement.

• 3 ways I Improved my Draft.

         1. I improved my counter argument with examples.
         2. I used more data to improve my opinion.
         3. I fixed citation to fit MLA format.

• 3 Ways Maritza Improved her Draft.

         1. Maritza improved F.P in the conclusion.
         2. She used more statistics for details.
         3. She is working on worked cited

Rough Draft Improvements

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Improvements

One way that I improved my draft was by adding a little more statistics to my paper. I also, changed the way my conclusion was organized. Oksoon made a comment that my F.P did not match the one from y introduction. She said that it should match because the paper did not make sense the way I organized it. Therefore, I changed some sentences in my conclusion. I have not yet but I am in the process of adding more information to my paper and adding all the sources I used to my works cited.

Irina improved her paper by organizing her paper a little different. She also added a little more information to it. It looks like she tried to add more of her opinion to it.

On my draft I make some changes on body paragraph by adding some more information, and I organized some of the citations.

I added more opinion on body paragraph, but I need to work more on it.

Oksoon change her last suppotive point, and she adds more details.

She adds more details to support counterargument.

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By: Irina Pokharel

Chapter 17

Integrating Sources and Avoiding Plagiarism

In this chapter it talks about how to avoid plagiarism. Sometimes it is intentional but other times it is unintentional. It gives us many tips which are very helpful. Sometimes I caught myself plagiarizing but sometimes I don't. This chapter will help me know if I do or not. I learned that even if we paraphrase we have to document the source. Also when paraphrasing we cannot include our own opinions. I used to think it was alright to include our own opinions in this section but I was wrong. I think that everything in this chapter is very important. It is a great guide and it gives great tips on how to paraphrase, summarize, quote, and synthesize.

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